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Cathleen Armstrong's debut novel Welcome to Last Chance, published by Revell (A Division of Baker Books), completes the desired objective for the CBA demographic. Whether or not you classify it as a romance or women's fiction, it will definitely fit the prescribed content for expected Christian fiction. Written cleanly with appropriate clichés used by the small town characters, this story tells of a young woman on the run who gets one more chance for respectability in the cleverly named dot on the map where she is forced to stop.
Lainie Davis barely makes it to Last Chance in the dark as her old quickly purchased Mustang limps into this tiny town and dies in the parking lot of the one and only local bar. After a brief inquiry inside, she ends up sleeping in her car. Trying to hide from a boyfriend in California and on her way to El Paso, this small town in New Mexico will have to do until she can figure a way out. Discovering an unexpected package in the lining of her backpack, she doesn't allow it out of her sight.
After throwing a fit in the bar's parking lot, she crosses the highway to the local diner known as the Dip and Dine where the sweet owner smothers her with attention and makes arrangements for her to stay with an elderly friend. It's too much for Lainie who's been on her own since she was thrown out of her home at 14. However, she really has no choice so she listens to the rules that accompany her lodging and grits her teeth over one of them.
The local bar owner (Ray) finally strikes a truce with Lainie, and they begin a tentative relationship. When Lainie starts work at the Dip and Dine, calls her friend in El Paso without revealing where she's staying, she learns her ex has made inquiries as to her whereabouts. This eliminates El Paso as a potential destination.
The well-drawn but typical small town characters begin to grow on Lainie as she attempts to decide what she must do. One of those decisions involves a talk with the local sheriff. As she begins to lower her guard just a bit, she appreciates most of the locals who accept her without reservation.
Welcome to Last Chance is the story of a lost young woman who needs something real and lasting in her life but doesn't recognize that reality until she's about to lose what she's gained. Her growth as a person surrounded by the unconditional love of those around her eventually wear her down but can't ultimately prevent her from thinking she still must run. Amidst more regretful decisions, she participates in the holiday season but plans her departure after another special event.
The brief picture of the ex-boyfriend is the only clichéd character, but he reminds me a lot of Penny's husband in Gina Holmes' Wings of Glass. Steven, Ray's brother, doesn't fit a military guy for me, not that there aren't some like him, but to make him so unlikable was disappointing. Lainie's character is prickly and punk, but over time she eases her harsh facade and relents, allowing herself to care about others instead of just her own survival.
Written precisely as one expects a CBA novel to be written, those who love these carefully constructed stories of small town life and loves will appreciate Cathleen Armstrong's Welcome to Last Chance. With faith being a primary focus of most of the Last Chance folks, there's no question where this story is going.
Father, please continue to provide the stories you have just for Cathleen to tell. Bless her for all she does in obedience to you. In the Name of Jesus, Amen.